i need some critics....

reijahl

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28 July 2006 to 10:34

#1

hi everybody!!! im new in recording but ive done a cpuople of tracks for the past six months or so. i need you guys to listen to some of the music ive done and i need an honest feedback whether it would be negative, which im sure that would be the case or positive which i dout there woukd be. please check this sight, please make some comments i really need some, anything will do espacially from the mixing side.

please check www.soundclick.com/reijahl

jah bless!
keep da riddim flowing!
positive vibration!

reijahl

HoboZig

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27 Décember 2006 to 07:32

#2

I prefer a much dryer drum sound, sounds swamped in reverb. but thats just personal taste. also try reducing some of the lows in your piano track

Deshmukh99

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29 May 2008 to 21:00

#3

Really great open sound. Agree with above poster about the drums. Also be careful about extreme panning left and right as you lost a bit of clarity in the interesting instruments on those sides. You can get a nicer depth picture by bussing and delaying off the key tracks.

cdanddvdpublisher

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30 May 2008 to 20:53

#4

Also not completely thrilled with the drums, but there's plenty of time to keep learning; just stick with it

emmapeel9

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15 Décember 2008 to 15:08

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I want something in 8's or similar timing in the verse which doesn't seem to have as much groove as I want. I'm either raising the hats and making them more prominent. The hats are already in 8's timing. I might also have the bass follow in a similar timing with a little variation to stop it sounding mechanical.

A distorted bass tone enters on the chorus. I'm guessing that this is the bottom of the electric guitar. I would filter it at about 120hz or higher if need be to get rid of that. If this is another instrument that is making that tone then I would filter that.

In short I would add some groove to the verse and clean up the bassy sounds on the chorus.

The top song is the one I'm refering to.

EP

Ruby Rough

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29 January 2009 to 15:24

#6

Hello!

I could use some critics as well - my ear is trained enough to know that I'm unhappy with our band's mixes, but not trained enough to know why.

When I listened to them in the beginning I thought they were fine, but when I compare them to the "big fish" they sound really weak.

Any ideas?

Three samples are on the following page:
http://www.myspace.com/rubyrough

We'd appreciate any help we could get from experienced ears. Thanks!

-Ruby

Ruby Rough